posting this a little late but o well
I'm quite pleased with the timing throughout. there are some grey areas such as the scene between the man and dog fighting, which i need to roughly plan and key out. other areas need to be tightened up too, as well as the sound fx which in places are quite dodgy.
I think there's going to be quite a drastic change to the soundtrack, i am planning on quite a simple score possibly an original solo instrumental piece tailored to the animation. something that will give my piece an independent feel.